Oooh! I like this! This is great in so many ways because you feel the sun shining at you when the clouds happen to move away, which can be associated with the wind. You have amazing poetic skills, hehe!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
Love reading your poems, you have such a way with words. Like the wind “teasing” I’ve started storing some of the phrases in my brain, to try and use in my own writing.
short-prose-fiction
There is one word for this poem: breathtaking.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Sending you 💖
Boss Babe Chronicles
How beautiful! I love the image as well, very magical.
Kelly Diane
Great words as always 😀
Unwanted Life
I don’t know why, but this makes me want to tell them the story of Icarus. The sun is beautiful, but get to close and you’ll get burnt
Jaya Avendel
Well said! I also love a fable about the bunny who shot a hole in the sun.
Unwanted Life
I haven’t heard that fable before
Jaya Avendel
It is an old fable about the sunrise and why you cannot look full-on at the sun. If you are interested, you can check it out at
https://boyscouttrail.com/content/story/rabbit_shoots_the_sun-885.asp
Token Artist
The image reminds me of Egyptian mythology. It makes for a powerful combo with your poem
Kirstin - LetsGoSomewhereElse.co.uk
Beautiful way to describe this art piece. I can almost hear the woops as they ride away from here!
Jaya Avendel
😊 Thank you so much!
petitehappenings
What a clever way to describe this photo!
Tiara Lynn
I love this. When I read this, I believe it’s saying that overtime the sad days gets better.
Jaya Avendel
That is such a unique way to see this! Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura
Wonderful poem, I love how ethereal it sounds x Great job!
Laura / https://www.laustworld.com/
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Ethereal is one of my favorite feels.
Nancy
Oooh! I like this! This is great in so many ways because you feel the sun shining at you when the clouds happen to move away, which can be associated with the wind. You have amazing poetic skills, hehe!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
Jaya Avendel
I was thinking of wind moving clouds when I wrote this. Love that you saw that picture!
adamjnew85
Love reading your poems, you have such a way with words. Like the wind “teasing” I’ve started storing some of the phrases in my brain, to try and use in my own writing.
Jaya Avendel
That is a wonderful thing to do! I jot down odd phrases as they come to me, and most of them wriggle their way into some piece of writing.
Jenny in Neverland
Another amazing poem. This one would be perfect for the beginning of Summer x
Jaya Avendel
Admittedly, my timing is a little off season-wise!