Sun Wave

Sun Wave Poem

Sun sweeps a carpet

Of frosted spikes leaving grass

Free to breath the morn.

Photo by Holly Wilfong on Unsplash

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26 Comments

  1. schmitztimo

    Very beautiful words. 🙂

  2. Nancy

    I love this analogy to the wave of the sun. The sun brightens up and brings in the warmth. Thanks for sharing this piece!
    Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me

  3. Margarida Vasconcelos (@daisyandthyme)

    So lovely. It emanates positivity and hope. I absolutely love sunny mornings but don’t enjoy them very often.

    1. Jaya Avendel

      We had a sunny morning here; may you enjoy one soon to.

  4. femaleoriginal

    Love this! Crisp cold mornings when the sun is shining is my favourite weather x
    https://www.femaleoriginal.com

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Mine to! Thank you.

  5. Laura

    This makes me think of spring, of growth, of crisp fresh mornings. You portray so much in so little words! Wonderful. Love it 🙂
    Laura / http://www.laustworld.com

  6. Jenny in Neverland

    Love this one! I love those cold Spring mornings as the sun is coming out – it reminded me of one of those! x

  7. Kirstin - LetsGoSomewhereElse.co.uk

    Short but impact full. I could feel the sun on my face and warmth in my bones!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Thank you, love! You make me smile.

  8. Amie.🌼 (@acurvyvegan)

    The way that you describe the image is amazing!
    Love, Amie ❤
    The Curvaceous Vegan

  9. BeingChloe

    sunny winter mornings are my absolute fave, they always feel fresh!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Fresh is such a lovely way to describe winter mornings! Thank you.

  10. petitehappenings

    Great way of describing this image! I love looking at the morning frost!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Sun on frost on the windows is one of my favorite views!

  11. irina Matache

    Great important post, where you make the main focus, really makes me happy for its necessary of importance.
    http://www.designercountry.com/

  12. Hannah Louisa

    The perfect words for this image love it 👌🏼
    Han // http://www.behindthefalselashes.com

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Thank you, love!

  13. Diffusing the Tension

    This is beautiful combined with the image! You have quite a talent

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Why, thank you! Aside from the writing, finding the perfect image is also something I love.

  14. bournemouthgirl

    So lovely. Perfect sunny winter morning!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      I am glad it came across to you. Thanks for reading. 🙂

    1. Jaya Avendel

      I am glad you enjoyed it.

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