Daisies
They say to bloom
where you are planted
but what if you are like
your best friend who
said no
alone for the world to
see while you were
planted in a garden and
were lost among the
daisies?
Photo by Alex Shuper
They say to bloom
where you are planted
but what if you are like
your best friend who
said no
alone for the world to
see while you were
planted in a garden and
were lost among the
daisies?
Photo by Alex Shuper
Dawn Pisturino
Beautiful, Layla, with profound sentiments!
Ka Malana - Fiestaestrellas.com
Perfect. I like this stand this flower is taking! 🌼
Susi Bocks
It works as long as you’re not discovered! 🙂
Resa
Piquing poem, Layla. I do believe I am a daisy in a field.
Baydreamer - Lauren Scott
Such a beautiful and thought-provoking poem, Layla. An unexpected excellent ending! 🩷
Pooja G
Such an interesting and thought provoking poem!
Ingrid
Poignantly written, Layla!
barbaraleaver
I can relate to this lovely piece. It is true to life
Keep Calm & Drink Coffee
Daisies are the flowers I prefer. They are so simple but they make me smile everytime.
The reflection you write is so deep!
Annabel
Beautiful philosophical verses! 🌻 The ending question is significant for us all to ponder and reflect. I guess I’d be a happy daisy among all others if end up in a garden 😂
Cheryl Batavia
What an exquisite poem, Layla! It is thought-provoking too. 🌸🌺🦋
Layla Todd
Thank you, Cheryl!
Bartholomew Barker
Nice one.
Kym Gordon Moore
WOW Layla, now that is a powerful thought! 💖 Blend in or stand out! 💐
Eugi
Well said, Layla, and beautifully penned.
D. Wallace Peach
What an interesting poem, Layla, and question that it poses. I think I’d go with the daisies. They’re good company. 🙂
Andrew McDowell
Well put.
paeansunplugged
Layla, this is beautiful and so well said! ❤️