Quarters
I.
Journal pages empty under midnight moon
Flesh awaiting the knife
My head curls into my belly until
My spine breaks.
II.
Bones dipped in ink
Time, merciless, threatening decay
June flowers with volcano eyes.
III.
Tomb in the sky
IV.
The watermelon with its teeth of iron
Sunset ocean filled with tears
Pen poised to forget
Time prepared to remember.
Happy New Year!
Photo by Dylann Hendricks | 딜란
rljpdx
Very cool, I like it.
Madhavraja
Thanks
Yelling Rosa
✍️👍
Miriam Costa
WELL EXPRESSED; I like it a lot.
Dua For Ex Love Back
good one
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I love the poem, Layla 💗 I hope the new year been treating you well!
Layla Todd
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! 🥰
Resa
Terrific! Thank you!
M Jay Dixit
A powerful piece, Layla. I enjoyed it very much!
Annabel
Beautiful and thought provoking verses! fabulous writing from you as always!
Layla Todd
Thank you for reading, Annabel! 🥰
mistermaxxx08
Very moving and visual words. Peace and welcome to the new year
Layla Todd
Thank you so much for reading!
D. Wallace Peach
Such strong and sharp-toothed imagery, Layla. I fear the new year will be frightening in many ways, but I hope for a gentler future. Powerful stuff!
Layla Todd
Thank you, Diana, for sharing your thoughts! ❣️
Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet
Vivid images, Layla! In a world at war, we long for peace in 2024. Happy New Year! <3
Layla Todd
I second this, Cheryl! Thanks for reading. ❣️
Annika Perry
Powerful and haunting poem, Layla! Incredible! Wishing you a Happy & Creative 2024! Annika
Layla Todd
Happy New Year, Annika! Thank you for reading. ❣️
Ka Malana - Fiestaestrellas.com
I love so much about the watermelon with teeth and bones dipped in ink. This is an intense poem that I welcome. Then I look at the title and it’s cut into quarters. I am filled with intrigue and want to know more, want to understand more. Evocative, indeed.
Happy New Year dear!! Write so much this year! 2024
Layla Todd
Thank you, Ka. Love that this poem made you think. May the words flow in 2024. ❣️
Pooja G
Really loved the poem, Happy New Year!
Cassa Bassa
Happy New Year Layla! May you start the year with a bright smile and plenty of laughter. 🎉💚🌟
Layla Todd
Thank you, Cassa. Wishing you well into 2024. ❣️
Ingrid
Stunning, Layla! Happy New Year to you 😊
Layla Todd
And to you, Ingrid. ❣️
Quarters – Zack
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Eugi
Happy New Year, Layla. 💖
Kym Gordon Moore
Beautiful thoughts. Happy New Year to you dear Layla! 😍🥂🥳
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Michele Lee
A glorious gift to read you! Anytime of year. Happy New Years to you, Layla! 🥳 Best wishes with school and all that you pursue!
Layla Todd
Happy New Year, Michele! May the words flow. ❣️
Michele Lee
Cheers to flowing words and inspired creativity! 🦋 Thank you, Layla! 💗
Writing to Freedom
Evocative verse Layla. Happy New Year!
Keep Calm & Drink Coffee
I wish I were able to wish you a Happy New Year in an equally magical way, but from my heart I wish you a HAPPY New Year four times over!
Layla Todd
Happiest of New Years, Claudia! May the coffee flow. ❣️
Keep Calm & Drink Coffee
<3
Michelle (Boomer Eco Crusader)
Happy New Year, Layla!
Tara Sitser
May the New Year bring you space for rest and healing of body & soul!
Layla Todd
And to you, Tara! ❣️
Jennifer Pentland
Happy New Year, Layla! 🙌🥳💫
clcouch123
I admire the visceral quality of your work. Happy New Year!
Layla Todd
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! ❣️
Dawn Pisturino
This poem sounds angry and suicidal. World events are affecting people negatively. I hope you’re okay. Wishing you a safe and happy New Year and a 2024 filled with much love, happiness, and success.
Layla Todd
It’s a world in turmoil, Dawn, but I am finding my balance. Thank you for reading! ❣️
Cindy Georgakas
Emotive and powerful lines Layla!
Happy New Year!🥳
Cindy Georgakas
Emotive and visceral lines, Layla!
Happy New Year! 🥂⭐️🥂💕
Layla Todd
Happy New Year, Cindy! ❣️
Cindy Georgakas
Thank you so very much Layla❣️
satyam rastogi
Happy new year 🎂
SelmaMartin
Happy New Year, Layla. Blessings.
Layla Todd
And to you, Selma! ❣️