Match Of The Seasons
A feeble ray of
Sunshine struggles against the
Snow Queen’s cold outmatched
In a clash of the seasons
Winter declares dominance.
Photo by Budimir Vasilijevic
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lynnmumbingmejia
This is great, Jaya! I can so feel this especially when it’s been so cold and gloomy for a while then the sun comes out for a bit. I get so happy but in the dead of winter, it only lasts the day then we are back to the cold and gloomy. Thanks for sharing xx
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Sophia Patel
love this!
Caedere
I absolutely love your works that are about the cold or winter. They send a shiver down my spine.
thathappyreader
Another beautiful poem! You’ve articulated well the battle of the seasons! Thanks for sharing!
ThatUnknownBlogger
This is so beautifully written! I love it.
Della Driscoll
So well written, beautiful words as always x
femaleoriginal
I love how this can be viewed as both the beginnings of Winter and the start of Spring! I’m definitely ready for some rays of sunshine that’s for sure! x
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nortoncharity
Oh wow! What a beautiful poem. It definitely describes whats going on with the weather right now perfectly.
Jaya Avendel
It really does! 🙂
Boss Babe Chronicles
So nicely done!
Riana.AngCanning
Ooo I love this one! I feel like it perfectly describes the walk I was on yesterday where the sun was poking through the trees and then the cool air seemed to take over.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for sharing; the wind seems so real to me through your words!
Nancy
I love this one!! Especially with the mention about the snow queen. I love that winter is coming – I can feel the coldness in the morning. Winter definitely is declaring dominance during this time! Thanks for sharing!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
Jaya Avendel
Brr. Those bitter mornings inspired this, as you guessed. 🙂
sophienaylor1
This is a gorgeous poem with a stunning title!
Soph – https://girlvsworldblog.com x
Jaya Avendel
Thank you kindly!
Laura
Love this! Feeble ray of sunshine is such a beautiful phrase 🙂
Laura / https://www.laustworld.com/
Jaya Avendel
I have felt it one too many times!
Jenny in Neverland
As a big fan of Winter, I love this one! x
mylilplace
Nicely done.
Megha's World
Well penned Jaya.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.