Triangle
Three birds sail in the
Noonday sun completing each
Other in silence.
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Three birds sail in the
Noonday sun completing each
Other in silence.
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Jenny in Neverland
Love this. To me is shows the power of nature and the animal kingdom!
Jessica Khater
This is so nice. I can imagine them. Your poem made me feel love.
thathappyreader
Another beautiful poem! I can picture them soaring and gliding right now! Thanks for sharing.
Riana.AngCanning
I love how your poems always evoke an emotion in me or make me think. They do so much in so few words! I’m particularly loving how you picked words here that you wouldn’t suspect – like “sail” when most people would use “soar” for birds. I love that unexpectedness!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you so much! I love that you picked up on my word play. 🙂
lynnmumbingmejia
So beautiful! Love those times where you can just be in each other’s presence and feel content. Thanks for sharing xx
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Jaya Avendel
Aww, love the way you read this! Thank you for sharing. 🙂
Della Driscoll
This one feels like it has a deeper meaning, I love that! Beautiful words as always x
Sharila
Your writing! The feeling of a full silence is a beautiful one that this poem captures in a brilliant way.
Kelly Diane
Such great words. This one feels really spiritual.
Lellalee
Oooh I love these thought-provoking posts. So spiritual and wonderful xxx
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for thinking on them! :
blacktulipbeauty
Aww this reminds me of myself and two of my friends and how we can sit in silence but still have a lovely time in each others presence. What a lovely poem!
Alice Xx
Jaya Avendel
What a sweet experience. I love that you have that with your friends. 🙂
Lisa's Notebook
We have some birds of prey near our house who do just this! I always love watching them, they look so free and so graceful. And utterly content. Lovely poem, Jaya, beautifully written, Lisa x
Jaya Avendel
Vultures is where I drew my inspiration from. Three black ones live down my road. 🙂
Birds in general are so pretty. And content is a good way to describe their airborne circling. Thank you!
justnatonya
It’s cool when you can hang out with people and enjoy the silence. You know where you don’t feel like HAVE to talk about something. Just being in their company is enough. Really complex and sweet poem. Certainly one of my favorites by you!
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Jaya Avendel
I love how you have interpreted this! There is a lot to be said when you can sit in silence with people and not feel awkward.
Thank you so much for sharing!
justnatonya
Exactly! It’s like an unspoken bond or connection you feel without having to explain it😍
mrdeluna
The bird (freedom) and the silence (a different language), two of my favorite topics.
Jaya Avendel
I love silence. So much blossoms in silence.