Shadow
He chases me
Sometimes slowing down because of his limp
Never catching me
But when I look over my shoulder
He is there.
Photo by Rendiansyah Nugroho on Unsplash
May the Words Flow
He chases me
Sometimes slowing down because of his limp
Never catching me
But when I look over my shoulder
He is there.
Photo by Rendiansyah Nugroho on Unsplash
Lellalee
Now this makes me want to know more – the entire story xxx
femaleoriginal
Ooh this one gives me the chills! x
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Alyssa C.
Chiiiiills! My imagination suddenly started working double time there!
Jaya Avendel
Thanks so much for sharing your reaction! 🙂
Single Mom Chapters
Wow! I love how I can actually image your poetry when I read it. Wonderful 😍
Diffusing the Tension
Spooky! This would be a good scary story. Keep up the good work!
Rayo
Oh, this one gives me chills. I like that I can imagine several meanings to this post. Really like your writing
Jaya Avendel
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts on this!
adamjnew85
Awesome. I really really love this one 😀
-Eugenia
Your words and the image make for a compelling and intriguing piece. Well done.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed.
-Eugenia
😉
Susi Bocks
Oh, this reminds me of nightmares I’ve woken up to, Jaya! Gave me goosebumps!
Jaya Avendel
I am glad you enjoyed! Nightmares give me the chills to.
Tom's Nature-up-close Photography and Mindfulness Blog
Like certain so-called leaders in government right now! 🙂
Jaya Avendel
Chuckles! The words can be read any way.
Megha's World
Wonderful piece Jaya. Quite captivating.
Jaya Avendel
I am glad you enjoyed it!
Afzal Moolla
this is profound! your words just gave a me chill – not a bad thing at all – but the so many ways of interpreting your piece is captivating. thank you for sharing your marvellous work here with us all.
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Jaya Avendel
I am glad you enjoyed it. Something about the feeling of someone or something following you makes neck hairs prick, as if you cannot walk fast enough to escape. Thank you for for reading.
Afzal Moolla
thank you for sharing. and yes there is that something about someone or something following you (perhaps even here on wordpress 🤔) that certainly gives one the heebee-jeebees … warmest wishes and peace ✌
Jaya Avendel
Chuckles. So true. We are always followed!
Afzal Moolla
brrrrrr … there go the hairs on the back of the neck 😂
Jaya Avendel
😀😂