Lullaby
The sun sings to a
Bank of morning fog lifting
Corners to open
The eyes of the earth to a day
Fresh of breath and clear of dawn.
May the Words Flow
The sun sings to a
Bank of morning fog lifting
Corners to open
The eyes of the earth to a day
Fresh of breath and clear of dawn.
Diffusing the Tension
This is another great one! It made me think of waking up and peeking out the window to see what the weather’s like, and taking a few moments to think about the day.
Jaya Avendel
I connected instantly with this early morning moment! Thanks for sharing.
Jenny in Neverland
I love this one! It immediately made me think of cold, misty mornings on various holidays within the UK I’ve been on!
Jaya Avendel
I have always wanted to visit the UK! I can imagine how lovely those misty mornings must be. 🙂
Fritzie | Life Travel Soul
Aah… this is so beautiful. Your words painted such a vivid picture of a lovely and serene morning. Love it!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you so much for sharing your experience of this piece! 🙂
Francesca Littler
This is so good! Beautiful words x
h.r.
Your writing is absolutely stunning. The imagery you create is nothing short of ethereal, and the images you choose go perfectly with your words. Beautiful as always.
-h. | https://thornsandall.com
Jaya Avendel
Image-hunting is a favorite pastime of mine! Thank you.
blacktulipbeauty
This paints such a vivid picture in my mind and feeling in my chest. Something quite nostalgic – like being able to let go of something and seeing a new perspective. I really love your poems!
Alice Xx
Jaya Avendel
😍 I love that you shared how this poem made you feel; thank you! Seeing how differently people feel things always fills me with wonder.
Baby Boomer Super Saver
Beautiful! There is often a bank of early morning fog here. It’s serene & peaceful.
Jaya Avendel
Serene is a lovely way to describe fog! Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
glowsteady
This is beautiful, and the most perfect image to go with it too x
Sophie
Jaya Avendel
Why, thank you! This is rarer in that I found and was inspired by the picture first!
Laura
Wonderful this makes me of think of light, and hope. Sort of new fresh start in the day. What a lovely poem!
Laura / https://www.laustworld.com/
justnatonya
I like this! Describes the perfect way to wake up in the morning, peeled eyes and a clear mind😍
Natonya | https://justnatonya.wordpress.com
Jaya Avendel
That is one of the best ways to wake up! Thank you.
bellavitanyc
I love this! So refreshing to read and a really quick morning pick me up 🙂
Nancy
Oooh I know that feeling of the morning lullaby, especially when you have big windows and the sun shines right at you! I know that feeling of the morning fog lifting, it is really cool to see the sun rise and what happens around us.
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
Mukul Singh
Beautifully penned!
Check mine too!
https://tenaciousbeliever07.wordpress.com/2018/11/13/someone-from-the-heaven/
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.
Mukul Singh
I am glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading!