Season’s Duel
Spring dances on the
Ribbon held in winter’s hand
Tight she clings to it
But every sunrise it slips
A little further away.
Photo by Photos By Beks on Unsplash
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nortoncharity
This sure is a wonderful poem. And I am so ready for spring to get here as well!
Hannah Louise Blog
This is beautiful, thanks for sharing!
Erika
Wow, this poem is beautiful. I loved it!
Lindsey
I love seeing what new poems you have up. The way you create the imagery with just a few lines never fails to amaze me. Another beautiful one.
cherbelle
So beautiful and an exquisite use of imagery !
thathappyreader
This photo is a great match for your lovely poem. It reminds me that spring will come again. Thanks for sharing!
🖤💀Britt K💀🖤 (@AltSpeaking)
Beautiful analogy. I find as the colder winter weather sets in, I’m also grasping to hold onto that little hope of spring as it slips away
Jaya Avendel
The essence of elusiveness! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 🙂
sophienaylor1
This is such a beautiful piece of writing and the photo goes beautifully with it! Such a lovely read. <3
Soph – https://girlvsworldblog.com x
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Partly inspired by watching two male deer fight under my apple tree.
sandraans
I like pictures that you are choosing and this black&white coloring! And also putting a big idea in only few words is something very special! Good job!
Jaya Avendel
I sometimes miss the color but I find it is more stimulating to leave it to others to put the color in. 🙂
Nancy
Oooh, this is a perfect analogy of the days getting longer and winter is slowly closing. I’m still excited for winter to come! You do a great job with these poems – you don’t need to write much but it still paints the entire portrait flawlessly!!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
Jaya Avendel
I cannot paint but I do what I can with ink. Thank you!
Amie.🌼 (@acurvyvegan)
I love your poems so much! They always hit a cord with me!
Love, Amie ❤
The Curvaceous Vegan
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! It is refreshing to know I am managing to reach that cord. 🙂
Soph Hearts
What a beautiful poem, I’ve woken up to a frost this morning here!
Soph – https://sophhearts.com x
Jaya Avendel
How pretty it must be when the sun shines!
Melissa Kacar
The photo goes perfectly with your poem! It’s so beautiful! Thanks for sharing! 🙂
Bette A. Stevens
Wonderful imagery…
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! I am glad I was able to capture the moment in words.