Soul Knife
Your tears cut me.
Please take my hands.
I will hold them
Until all is well.
And never will I use them
To hurt you.
May the Words Flow
Your tears cut me.
Please take my hands.
I will hold them
Until all is well.
And never will I use them
To hurt you.
femaleoriginal
Oooh this one is beautiful! x
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Jenny in Neverland
This one is so beautiful. Would make really lovely song lyrics as well!
Jaya Avendel
I had not thought of this as a song but I love the idea! 🙂
Amber Page | Blogger (@unpredictedpage)
Wow! such a great little poem. I bet writing is helping you find something to do during these times. I may have to start thinking about poetry myself.
Jaya Avendel
Writing really has been a great help to stay productive. I love poetry because it is short and sweet and simple, and hope you enjoy crafting poems if you take it up!
adamjnew85
Powerful, my partner lost her sister last year, and I’ve found it very difficult trying to help her through it. This really struck a chord.
Jaya Avendel
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts on this!
Lellalee
What beautiful words! I hope poetry is really helping you get through this weird moment in time!xxx
Jaya Avendel
All writing helps me through my thoughts. 🙂
MarieSkelton
So beautiful and pure. I wish all people had this intent. Love it
Unwanted Life
Powerful poem. It really hits you in the feels
Olivia
What a beautiful poem! Looking forward to seeing and reading more 🙂
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Lisa's Notebook
Ah, Jaya, this is lovely, so tender and warm. If I close my eyes I can feel myself being held and comforted. Beautifully written as always x
Jaya Avendel
If I close my eyes, your warm words still make me smile. Thank you!
Sophie
This is really sweet! 😀
Jess Rigg
This is so lovely!
Susi Bocks
This is so sweet, Jaya! 🙂
Jaya Avendel
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.
Simon
Kinda powerful…
Jaya Avendel
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
Simon
I did. I’ll have to look through more of your posts. It’s been hearing finding you 😀
Jaya Avendel
Happy reading!
Simon
😀👍