Dead Sea
A crimson haze in
The desert sky hides the blue
Fish used to swim here.
Photo by Brad Helmink on Unsplash
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May the Words Flow
Dominic Alapat
A beautiful poem about the ecology of our planet, and how it changes! It also makes you think about the environment seriously!
Sue Berk Koch
Lovely! It makes me think of space and the planets that used to hold water, the mysteries behind it all.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! I love the way you read this.
Josie | The Cheetah Buzz
This is like the perfect definition of a wasteland. What used to be (along with the fish) is no more. Thanks for this xxx
Richie
It takes real talent to say so much, in so few words. Sadly, I’m not convinced that those in a position to make a substantial change will ever take the time to read it. Still, slightly more optimistically, if it makes just one person stop and think, and make a change then it has been a huge success.
Brooke Ressell
I agree with the comment above. It really does make you think. The planet is certainly changing.
Jenny in Neverland
This is powerful and kind of sad, if you interpret it in that way x
Bexa
Short but powerful. Your words are always so thought-provoking, thank you for sharing your talent <3 xx
Bexa | http://www.hellobexa.com
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Come And Read With Me
This is really chilling and amazingly written!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you kindly. 🙂
Enn
I love how you say so much by saying so little.
LanaLikes
I like this one a lot! Thought provoking | lanalikes.com
Victoria
Lovely and thought-provoking poem. Thanks for the perspective ☺️
ellieslondon
Such a beautiful (and fascinating) part of the world ♥
Unwanted Life
I wish I had the kind of writing skills to write stuff like this
Jaya Avendel
What we write is vastly different, therefor so is our talent. 🙂
Rayo
Your use of words is so different, I like it. Such a talent 💜
Life Travel Soul
Very interesting. It sparked my interest in the Dead Sea.
glowsteady
This is a chilling one! x
Jaya Avendel
Brr. ❄️
bournemouthgirl
Makes you think x
Jaya Avendel
I am so glad!