Cupid’s Arrow
Silent in the trees
Unerring on its way to
Pierce a broken heart.
May the Words Flow
Silent in the trees
Unerring on its way to
Pierce a broken heart.
journalofagemini
I loved this!
Enn
Beautiful!
Dr. Vador
I absolutely love your stuff I cannot wait for you to come out with a ebook, or something.
Jaya Avendel
I have been devoting a lot of time to thinking about an ebook. 🙂
NatGutmor
I love your words
Lindifique
Anika May
Beautiful words!
Anika | chaptersofmay.com
nortoncharity
You are such a great poet! I always love reading your work! Keep on sharing it!
Boss Babe Chronicles
Cupid really does usually show up after getting a broken heart! I love the image too.
Diffusing the Tension
Same as another commenter said, these poems always make me picture so much more than it actually says. The mark of a good poet 🙂 Keep up all your amazing work!
Lellalee
I love the word ‘unerring’! A few words can be so powerful and conjure up som any images. I love reading your beautiful lines of poetry xxx
Jaya Avendel
I have come across some obscure words lately and loved using them in poetry. Thank you!
Je
This Cupid’s arrow is on a mission and shall not be denied.
No heart needs love more than one trying to pick up the pieces.
Jaya Avendel
Love how this reads like a mini poem! 🙂
maddieastle
I don’t know how you always make me picture so much from so few words! I love it Jaya, keep it up ☺️
femaleoriginal
I was drawn to this one from the imagery! It’s definitely one of my favourites of your 🙂 x
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justnatonya
O that’s beautiful 😍 I’m currently waiting on Cupid too😂
Natonya |
https://justnatonya.wordpress.com
Jaya Avendel
He will come for you!
justnatonya
Thanks so much❤️❤️❤️
Jordanne / Ofaglasgowgirl
I think this is my favourite yet, it en-captures the whole essence of cupid and what cupid means. Very nicely written and flows perfectly.
Jordanne // Thelifeofaglasgowgirl.co.uk
Jaya Avendel
Your warm words make my day! You captured what I had in mind as I wrote the poem.
Riana.AngCanning
Ooo I like this one! Gave me shivers!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for sharing such a unique reaction. 🙂
Kayleigh Zara
This is a really gorgeous poem, I love the last two lines they’re really beautiful x
Kayleigh Zara ❄️✨ http://www.kayleighzaraa.com
Jaya Avendel
This haiku loved coming together for me. Thank you for enjoying!
Tamra Elizabeth Cater
I like this one! 🙂
Jaya Avendel
Love it when my few words are enjoyed. 🙂
Meaghan
This is lovely! Now that you mention it, the broken hearted do seem to fall in love quicker than others!
Jaya Avendel
A fine way of interpreting the poem! Thank you.