Stronger Things
Stalwart mountainside
Boomerangs the hurricane
Back toward the shore.
Photo via Pixabay
May the Words Flow
Stalwart mountainside
Boomerangs the hurricane
Back toward the shore.
Photo via Pixabay
Dominic Alapat
A short and beautiful poem with powerful imagery! Also, it conveys a message of inner strength!
adamjnew85
I must sound like a broken record, but I’ll say it again…
Love this!
Jaya Avendel
🙂 I appreciate even the treasured notes left on a broken record. Thank you!
lifestyleseason
Amazing! This is so powerful!
quirkymoms486
Powerful! Love it!!
thelonelyauthorblog
Again, powerfully written.
Nancy
Ooh! I like this, the mountain is basically protecting what’s behind it with its height, making the hurricane turn around. Kind of reminds me of Game of Thrones when they call the guy The Mountain! Thanks for sharing this!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
BrittnyLee
“Boomerangs the hurricane “- awesome and powerful
bournemouthgirl
So beautiful. The smell of the beach and sea is so great! The picture works so well with your writing!
Jaya Avendel
The smell of the beach is unforgettable. All that salt! 🙂
adamjnew85
Stalwart mountainside is brilliant. The perfect description in this context. Love it 😊
Sakshi Raina
Wow, in such less words you managed to write something beautiful and inspiring 🙂
Whenever I feel defeated, I’m going to think about this poem a lot from now xx
Jaya Avendel
Aww, thank you! I love knowing this piece stuck with you.
Girl Way Up North
Beautiful! This has me longing for the outdoors.
Jenny in Neverland
Love this. The title of this one drew me in!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! I thought about what to call this piece for some time, so I am happy you liked it.
Lisa's Notebook
This is lovely, Jaya, I can imagine the mountain, so solid, acting as a bulwark against the gales, literally turning them around to dissipate over the sea. Beautiful! Lisa x
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for sharing the beautiful imagery this poem conjured for you!
Je
And this is why I love mountains and their resilience.
Inspiring and instills a sense of courage in you when you read it. Love it!
Jaya Avendel
Mountains take my breath away. Resilience is a lovely word to describe them!
eob2
I can feel the rumble and roar of the driving wind! Really nice J.
glowsteady
Beautiful! I can almost smell the sea reading this x
Jaya Avendel
The smell of the sea is refreshing indeed.
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