Lunar
She climbed high into
The night on a staircase of
Stars to see the world.
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She climbed high into
The night on a staircase of
Stars to see the world.
Photo by Guzman Barquin on Unsplash
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Dominic Alapat
Wow! What a beautiful poem! Such gorgeous imagery!
Michelle
I love this! Just been reading a few of your posts. I love how poetry can make you feel, its beautiful. Thank you for posting your talent x
Jaya Avendel
Thank you so much, Michelle! I love meeting the people who enjoy my writing.
Beck
Superb!
Lellalee
My daughters and I have been star gazing since lockdown began. This poem really struck me. We have been climbing to the stars and seeing more of the world, for the beauty that it is. Beautiful words xxx
Jaya Avendel
Nights out stargazing sound so peaceful! Thanks so much for sharing the memories Lunar evoked.
Jenny in Neverland
Oooh this one is so beautiful! Thanks for sharing 🙂
Navita Bhatia
That’s fantastic!! I am taking it as- she found her way even in the darkest night using the right resources. Your perspective might be different from mine😊. I am I. Complete aww of this one.
Jaya Avendel
Love your perspective on this! One of the best things about writing is no one ever sees what you have written the same way as yourself. 🙂
femaleoriginal
‘A staircase of stars’ I love that! The photo works so perfectly with the poetry as well 🙂 x
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The Twenty Percent
So beautiful! Your picture and the words fit so well together!
glowsteady
This is so beautiful, a staircase of stars sounds like an absolute dream. You chose a perfect image to go with it too x
Sophie
Keep Calm & Drink Coffee
I would love to have a staricase of stars as well …
Kelsey
Another fantastic addition to your collection! This one could be a tattoo. I LOVE it! Have you ever considered compiling your poems into a collection to publish? You have a very strong, resonating voice
Jaya Avendel
Creating a poetry collection has been on my mind for a while now! I am been digging into resources to try and make that happen. 🙂
Melissa Kacar
That photo pairs so well with your beautiful words – both feel so dreamlike and ethereal. Thanks for sharing!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for your kind words and for enjoying this little poem!
Tiffany
This is beautiful. I love it.
Shantanu Baruah
What an imagery you created with such a few words. Dreamy, aspiring and a strong character you displayed here
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for your beautiful words!
Shantanu Baruah
My absolute pleasure
taurusingemini
That path, leading up to the, moon…
Jaya Avendel
It is enchanting . . .
A Sustainably Simple Life
Absolutely beautiful! As always, I’m in awe at how you can capture such a perfect image in these few words.
Jaya Avendel
Thanks so much for enjoying this piece!
Nancy
Ooooh!!! I really like this one. This reminded me of the comet that passed by earlier this week. Sometimes, we need to be in such an elevation to see the whole picture below us, the earth. I always enjoyed that especially when I was on a plane! Hope we can go back to those days soon.
Nancy ✨ exquisitely.me
Jaya Avendel
Me to! Because of the trees around me, I always make sure to go up to an overlook when I know there is an eclipse. I saw a lovely super-moon once, and that is what inspired this haiku. 🙂
meredithdent
This is so beautiful, I love the images in conjured up in the mind.
Lozza
I love this!
Short but moving! ☺️
Thanks for sharing!
Love Lozza x
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Angie
Love this! I haven’t really ever come across a blog that features a lot of poetry! I read a few of your poems and one of your stories and you’re an amazing writer! Your work is so thought provoking and powerful!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you so much! It makes me so happy to know you enjoyed my writing; I love being able to write about my passions. 🙂
Angie
Love this! I haven’t really come across any blogs that feature a lot of poetry before and this is so unique! You’re a really powerful writer!