Hungry Mouth

Hungry Mouth Haiku

There is an empty

Hole inside me waiting to

Devour laughter.

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27 Comments

  1. Jenny in Neverland

    Wow, this is quite a powerful one! Can an imagine a villain in a Fantasy movie saying this!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Oo, love the image this brings to mind! Thanks for sharing.

  2. Della Driscoll

    A gorgeous and heartfelt poem, I love this post! Thanks for sharing xx

  3. thathappyreader

    I quite often feel this way but have never been able to articulate it this eloquently! Well done!

  4. lynnmumbingmejia

    A very common theme that people who often feel like there is something missing will try and fill it with laughter. Thanks for sharing Jaya x
    http://www.lynnmumbingmejia.com

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Being able to see something with a little humor is a wonderful way to find more positive outlooks on bad situations. 🙂

  5. Unwanted Life

    I feel that one. When I start to skip into despair, laughter and humour are my only saving grace

  6. nortoncharity

    This is yet another wonderful poem. Thanks so much for sharing your amazing talent with us!

  7. Margarida Vasconcelos (@daisyandthyme)

    What a powerful picture and powerful message. You are so talented.

  8. thelifeofashleighdavis

    You are extremely talented. What intrigued me the most was the different ways people interpret it 🙂
    Thank you for sharing Jaya!
    Ashleigh – https://www.ashleighsmoments.com

    1. Jaya Avendel

      I love seeing how the same words mean different things to individuals. 🙂

  9. Lisa's Notebook

    That is such a creepy poem, Jaya. It made me think of the COVID-19 virus and all the unknown and faceless monsters that are swallowing the light and joy at the moment. You do have a way with words, you really do! X

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Ooh, I never thought of this poem in such a light so thanks for sharing a new face to this piece! 🙂

  10. Dr. Vador

    I think you should think of transition to hallmark cards. I love this piece.

    1. Jaya Avendel

      I do not know if I am good enough for that yet but thank you for your kind words! 🙂

  11. aimsysantics

    Wow, this one hits. Lovely words!
    Aimsy xoxo
    Aimsy’s Antics

  12. Life Travel Soul

    Yes… you do have a beautiful way with words. Wishing you lots of laughter my friend! Have a wonderful week ahead 🙂

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Wishing you all the joy! Thank you.

  13. Holly

    I hope you get to experience all of the laughter in the world!
    Holly
    http://www.adailydoseofholly.com

  14. mylifeofpsych

    I could never write such meaningful poetry like this!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      All it takes is practice. 🙂

  15. Holly

    You have such a beautiful way with words!

  16. zeesviews

    God bless you with happiness🤗🤗

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