Flood
Crooked tree at the
River’s banks touched by pink foam
The sun drowns in grey.
Photo by Alireza Badiee on Unsplash
May the Words Flow
Crooked tree at the
River’s banks touched by pink foam
The sun drowns in grey.
Photo by Alireza Badiee on Unsplash
Dominic Alapat
Such powerful imagery in three simple lines! Wow!
Yaya
I love short poems, they’re like one of those tiny moments in life where you’re like, ‘I wish I could freeze this and keep it forever’ 🙂
Jaya Avendel
😍 Thank you for sharing a lovely thought.
kalliopechasing
I can seriously see your poem in the picture. I love it!
Overall your poem makes me feel peaceful. But like the peace that just comes after hard times.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Your reaction to this poem warms my heart.
adamjnew85
As always good writing, but you couldn’t have found a better picture to go with it 👏
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! This is one of my favorite photos to have stumbled across so far.
maddieastle
I love this. Your words are so simple but provoke so much thought!
In Asian Spaces
Simple, but powerful. I like it.
Anika May
Beautiful words! I love the simplicity of your poems.
Anika | chaptersofmay.com
Shantanu Baruah
Absolutely gorgeous. Love the picturesque you created with words
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Painting pictures with words is a pastime I love.
Shantanu Baruah
And you do a fab job
justinbarone
You’re ability to convey and capture the mood both visually and verbaly is inspiring and thought provoking. This made me feel i was looking through the eyes of a warrior reborn from the earth, with a new vision, hope and focus. Inspiring.
Justinbarone.com
Jaya Avendel
I love how you interpreted this! Thank you for sharing.
glowsteady
Lovely poem, very atmospheric. And another great choice of photo! x
Sophie
Unwanted Life
A well matched image to your awesome poem
Unwanted Life
Another awesome poem and a very well matched image
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! I derive great joy from picture-hunting!
Jenny in Neverland
Very atmospheric, another great poem x
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Capturing even a sliver of atmosphere is a triumphant task.
Charlotte Louise
Such a beautiful poem! An amazing photo as well!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Who knows what is hiding in those depths.
bournemouthgirl
Such a great photograph to mimic your poem!
Jaya Avendel
Mimic is a good word for it. Thank you!
bournemouthgirl
You are welcome x
robinleeann
Great poem! Short but impactful!
meredithdent
Stunning poem, love the photo ❤️
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! xoxo
Nancy
I like this poem – it gives a very subtle mood. At the same time, when there is a crooked tree, more of it becomes submerged into the waters, versus one that is standing straight.
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
Jaya Avendel
I love subtle moods; it gives way for more contemplation than when everything is already laid out. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!