Essence Of Verse
I struggled to voice my emotions
I stretched my mind to find words
I sought a language to
Translate my thoughts into verse.
When I stopped trying to
Cage what I felt
My heart sprang open and the
Language of love poured forth.
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schmitztimo
This one is really amazing. You really described the essence of a verse very well.
Dominic Alapat
A profound and sublime poem about poetry!
Chloe Chats
Enjoyed reading your poem, it’s a really lovely piece. It really is an amazing feeling to be able to express how you’re feeling even if the words don’t come to us at first
Jaya Avendel
🙂 The best feelings take time to be put down exactly in ink. The time is worth it!
Della Driscoll
So powerful! I absolutely loved reading this xx
thathappyreader
This is such a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it.
Kelly Diane
This is such a beautifully written piece Jaya.
Hannah Louise Blog
I love this, such a gorgeous piece of writing!
Fritzie
Ah, this is so beautiful! It is so exhilarating to just express what you truly feel.
Caedere
I love how this poem of yours flows, you outdid yourself this time!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! I aim for new heights each time I write. 🙂
Jenny in Neverland
As a writer, I absolutely love this one!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! As a writer, I loved writing this one.
justnatonya
Yes! It’s so amazing to free yourself and let your voice speak your truth😍
Natonya | https://JustNatonya.wordpress.com
Jaya Avendel
Thank you so much! I love meeting people who have experienced this freedom as well.
athousandbitsofpaper
This poem is beautiful Thankyou for sharing
Kayleigh Zara
I really like this one! It was nice to read a longer piece of poetry too x
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! I have actually enjoyed writing longer poems recently.
inclusiveteach.com
Yes! What a verse. Thank you
Jaya Avendel
So glad you enjoyed! It is amazing what happens when we let our thoughts flow freely.
Mukul Singh
Beautiful!!!
Check mine too
https://tenaciousbeliever07.wordpress.com/2018/06/19/i-dont-want-to-fall-in-love/
Jaya Avendel
Thank you!
Mukul Singh
No problem man! You write well!
Jaya Avendel
I am happy you enjoy what I am writing. 🙂
Mukul Singh
Yes!