Carefree

Carefree Haiku

Snow birds hop across

Ice crystals blown into drifts

Delighting in play.

Photo by Aaron Burden on Unsplash

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23 Comments

  1. lynnmumbingmejia

    So gorgeous! I absolutely love your poetry involving winter and fall. My fav seasons. Thank you for sharing such beautiful imagery, Jaya xx
    http://www.lynnmumbingmejia.com

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Thank you! I love writing these little seasonal poems.

  2. Sara James

    The birds playing and melting of the snow create a wonderful and lovely atmosphere. Your words have pictured that wonderfully.
    Lovely poem.

  3. thathappyreader

    This is such a lovely poem! I can hear the beautiful silence in your words. Thanks for sharing!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Love your experience of this, especially ‘silence in your words’.

  4. Jenny in Neverland

    Carefree is the perfect title for this poem!

  5. Lellalee

    I was hoping for snow this week. These words really speak to me at this moment in time!!!xxx

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Valentine’s Day with a snow shower would have been pretty! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!

  6. Amie.🌼 (@acurvyvegan)

    This poem is honestly so magical!
    Love, Amie ❤
    The Curvaceous Vegan

    1. solidparent

      The imagery is on point in this one! I love it!

      1. Jaya Avendel

        Thank you so much!

    2. Jaya Avendel

      I think it is all in the picture this time round. 🙂

  7. Gina Kay Daniel - Interior Design Blogger

    So beautiful, you really have a way with words x

    1. Jaya Avendel

      I do my best. 🙂

  8. nortoncharity

    What a beautifully written poem. I love the snow. It always feels so magical!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Thank you so much; I love seeing how a few words make everyone feel something different.

    1. Jaya Avendel

      Thank you so much for enjoying.

  9. mylilplace

    Beautiful image captured in this poem.

    1. Jaya Avendel

      This piece is one of my favorites. 😊

  10. lynyo

    Awesome composition with words!! Nice pic!

    1. Jaya Avendel

      I find the most wonderful photos on Unsplash. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem!

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