Haiku Series / April 19, 2019 B is for Baby B is for Baby A heart outside your body Enriching your time. Want access to exclusive writing? Become a patron! Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window)MoreClick to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pocket (Opens in new window)Click to share on Telegram (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related Topics Creative Writing Family Haiku Literary Micropoetry Poetry Relationship Self Improvement Senryu Writing Post navigation < P is for PerfectOne-Sided > You Might Also Like P is for Pestle W is Wax T is for Teacher 22 Comments The busy shelf September 12, 2020 at 2:24 am Reply Beautiful! It really is, a heart outside your body. Everything is felt so much more intensely through them, just like an organ exposed Loading... The Queensights September 11, 2020 at 11:41 pm Reply I agree, it’s a heart outside our body. A piece of our own. x Loading... gabbyabigailll September 11, 2020 at 12:26 pm Reply Aw this one is way too precious! This made me miss my little niece! Loading... Jenny in Neverland September 11, 2020 at 5:59 am Reply This poem even makes ME want kids! Loading... Jaya Avendel September 11, 2020 at 3:29 pm Reply Your words make me smile! Thank you! Loading... nortoncharity September 10, 2020 at 7:07 pm Reply Such a sweet and beautiful poem! Loved it! Loading... The Book View September 10, 2020 at 11:52 am Reply This is the perfect way to describe a baby! My little niece is a little over one now, but it feels like she carries my heart around wherever she goes. Loading... Jaya Avendel September 10, 2020 at 4:25 pm Reply 🙂 It is such a sweet feeling. Loading... Diffusing the Tension September 9, 2020 at 6:46 am Reply A heart outside your body is a perfect way to describe it. I can’t wait to meet our new little one! Loading... Jaya Avendel September 9, 2020 at 3:25 pm Reply Thank you! Love that you connected with this piece. Loading... Kelly Diane September 9, 2020 at 5:34 am Reply Such lovely words, beautifully written. Loading... Riana.AngCanning September 8, 2020 at 6:56 pm Reply I love how your poems always make me feel something. It’s so incredible that you can do that with so few words. I’m not a parent yet but I can’t wait to have this feeling one day! Loading... sunkissedlexblog September 8, 2020 at 6:02 pm Reply This is so cute! Very well written! Thanks for sharing! Loading... Loren September 8, 2020 at 5:49 pm Reply So heartwarming and straight to the point! Would be perfect for a congratulatory card. Loading... Jaya Avendel September 9, 2020 at 3:26 pm Reply That is such a sweet idea! Loading... mylilplace April 30, 2019 at 5:45 pm Reply Well said! Nice one, Jaya! Loading... Jaya Avendel April 30, 2019 at 8:23 pm Reply Thank you! Loading... paeansunplugged April 23, 2019 at 1:44 am Reply Yes, so true! Loading... Jaya Avendel April 23, 2019 at 8:10 pm Reply The truth is often profound and sometimes even a little funny. 😊 Loading... paeansunplugged April 24, 2019 at 1:27 am Reply So it is. 😊 Loading... Tony Starling Kidd April 19, 2019 at 9:03 pm Reply And beautiful Loading... Jaya Avendel April 19, 2019 at 9:05 pm Reply Thank you! I love it when my pieces are enjoyed. Loading... Share your thoughts!Cancel reply
The busy shelf
Beautiful! It really is, a heart outside your body. Everything is felt so much more intensely through them, just like an organ exposed
The Queensights
I agree, it’s a heart outside our body. A piece of our own. x
gabbyabigailll
Aw this one is way too precious! This made me miss my little niece!
Jenny in Neverland
This poem even makes ME want kids!
Jaya Avendel
Your words make me smile! Thank you!
nortoncharity
Such a sweet and beautiful poem! Loved it!
The Book View
This is the perfect way to describe a baby! My little niece is a little over one now, but it feels like she carries my heart around wherever she goes.
Jaya Avendel
🙂 It is such a sweet feeling.
Diffusing the Tension
A heart outside your body is a perfect way to describe it. I can’t wait to meet our new little one!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Love that you connected with this piece.
Kelly Diane
Such lovely words, beautifully written.
Riana.AngCanning
I love how your poems always make me feel something. It’s so incredible that you can do that with so few words. I’m not a parent yet but I can’t wait to have this feeling one day!
sunkissedlexblog
This is so cute! Very well written! Thanks for sharing!
Loren
So heartwarming and straight to the point! Would be perfect for a congratulatory card.
Jaya Avendel
That is such a sweet idea!
mylilplace
Well said! Nice one, Jaya!
Jaya Avendel
Thank you!
paeansunplugged
Yes, so true!
Jaya Avendel
The truth is often profound and sometimes even a little funny. 😊
paeansunplugged
So it is. 😊
Tony Starling Kidd
And beautiful
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! I love it when my pieces are enjoyed.