We Forget
Like the earth
Revolving
Minds change around their
Axis as well.
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Like the earth
Revolving
Minds change around their
Axis as well.
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melissa major
wow, such a wonderful poem with lots of meaning! So much depth
Kelly Diane
Beautiful poem – This really touched me. I’ve been thinking about what changes I want to make next year and the idea that I’m on an axis really resonates with me.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for your beautiful read, Kelly!
Ming Qian
Love the idea of the axis and how there is always a reference point that grounds us! Do you think it’s possible that this axis can shift though? Hmm…
Jaya Avendel
Perhaps an axis cannot shift scientifically, but metaphorically I believe it tips and rebalances. 🙂
brittshedhappens
Short but so powerful! Thank you for sharing this – so true!
Lindsey
Ooh I love this. I’ve been struggling lately with trying to decide what I actually want and this feels like it relates so well! Beautiful, as usual.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! Love the way you interpreted this piece.
Clarissa
I love the imagery here! I think people often feel like no one ever changes – that they’re kind of fixed where they are forever. But in my personal experience, my mindset, beliefs and priorities have tended to evolve over time.
Jaya Avendel
Beautifully said, and evolve is a lovely word for our kind of change. 🙂
thathappyreader
A beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing.
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betterthangoodenough123
Interesting poem. I guess this means knowing where our axis is can be important to staying grounded. Thanks for sharing!
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Jaya Avendel
Exactly! But it is also good remember one can be fully grounded in an idea yet still change their mind. 🙂
Kayleigh Zara
You have a really unique style of poetry and I really enjoy reading them, have you ever thought of shooting some imagery to go with them?
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Jaya Avendel
I am working on shooting imagery; I would like to but have not yet developed the skill or set aside the proper time to do it.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
bournemouthgirl
Lovely post!
TenderfootNurse
Love your poetry.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! 🥰
Sophie Wentworth
This was very thought provoking! Completely true though x
Sophie
Jaya Avendel
So glad you could relate!
Shantanu Baruah
wow – deep and lovely
Jaya Avendel
Thank you!
Shantanu Baruah
My absolute pleasure
thelonelyauthorblog
Yes, they do. Love the creativity in this
Jaya Avendel
I quite enjoyed writing it! Thank you for enjoying reading it. 🙂