Pitcher
A bubbling well
Of desperation rises
Turn it into fuel.
Photo by Shangyou Shi on Unsplash
May the Words Flow
A bubbling well
Of desperation rises
Turn it into fuel.
Photo by Shangyou Shi on Unsplash
bournemouthgirl
Definitely turning a negative into a positive. Or finding a positive aspect of silver lining! The photo goes so well with this thought!
Brady Bourassa
Great post as always Jaya! I might have to turn those lemons into fuel when times get tough, even though making lemonade is much much tastier! 😀
As always, I look forward to more!
Jaya Avendel
😀 I do like lemonade! Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Jenny in Neverland
Great Haiku. I’m no good at them but I bet the challenge of coming up with them is fun!
Jaya Avendel
The boundaries of haiku’s are why I love writing them. 🙂
Kayleigh Zara
I really enjoy a haiku, and I love how you’ve embedded so much into such few words. It’s a really great piece x
Kayleigh Zara 🌿 http://www.kayleighzaraa.com
Jaya Avendel
Some people do not like the limitations but I love the challenge of boiling down what I want to say. 🙂
Sophie Wentworth
This is so clever, love the energy shift x
Sophie
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Jaya Avendel
Glad you felt it! 😀
Kyra | lovekyra.co.uk
This is so clever, it’s a haiku right? I always sucked at writing poetry. I found creative writing more my forte!
-Kyra
Jaya Avendel
It is a haiku! You knew. 🙂
I like the tightness of the format but often find I need the freedom to write what I will as well.
Kyra | lovekyra.co.uk
Yay! And I agree, they’re very clever to write but quite restricted! Xx
Monika Gil
Love the post x
Jaya Avendel
😊
Laura Sneddon
I love this and I love the feel of your blog. Have a lovely day x
Jaya Avendel
I am so happy to know the feel and look felt right to you! Thank you for reading.
justthegameoflife
Love it :]
In mind and out
Love this!
Jaya Avendel
So glad to know it resonated with you!
Shantanu Baruah
Very beautiful – channeling the energy to the right source
Jaya Avendel
Precisely. 🙂
Shantanu Baruah
🌸😊