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Thrust I am into unwelcome hugs
No choice but to bleed hearts and tears
Princess underdog bully
I live these lives madly
In their heads I laugh
No room for me
Judgement day
Lack of
Trust.
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Dominic Alapat
An intense poem that conveys pain beautifully! Liked the form too!
Nyakio
Beautiful ❤️
Kelly Diane
This is such a powerful piece.
bournemouthgirl
This is a really interesting piece, great use of language Jaya!
poorvi kumar
this was just beautiful!
Hayley
Such a powerful and thought provoking poem, Jaya! The first time I read it, I interpreted it very differently to how I interpreted it the second time. It always amazes me how the meaning behind your words can change with a small shift in perspective. 🙂
Erika
Beautiful, it’s pisces season so this really resonated.
aimsysantics
What a great piece. It can take on so many different meanings and take a life of its own from them!
Aimsy xoxo
Aimsy’s Antics
Kelly Diane
This is just a poignant poem. It really spoke to me and got me thinking about currently events being spoken about in the media.
barbaraleaver
You have portrayed feelings a lot of us have at times with few words – it’s very emotive!
babygaydays
I love this poem! Fantastic piece of writing and beautifully done!
Merry
The words “No choice but to bleed hearts and tears” really attract me! Such a powerful poem and beautifully written. Always great work, Jaya x
Anika
Beautiful words again, Jaya! I don’t know if it’s intentional but I love the shape the words take too, definitely affected the pace and intensity when I was reading. Great post!
Anika | chaptersofmay.com
Jaya Avendel
Thank you so much for appreciating the shape of this piece! I love that you connected with the way it held the words together. 🙂
Unwanted Life
That seems to pretty much sum up my entire childhood. Another great piece
Tom
Interesting ideas, if you’re considering generally introverted people. Not everyone feeds off the energy of others, and for some, the experience of interaction can be exhausting and feel like you are bleeding away a part of yourself
Jenny in Neverland
Oooh this was powerful! Kinda feels like it should be in a YA book or movie!
Amber Page
Amazingly written, love it!
Amber | https://theunpredictedpage.com
Lisa's Notebook
Obviously I don’t know what or who you had in mind when you wrote this but it made me think of celebrities who have to put on a public face for the crowds and fans, no matter how they really feel inside. Love this, Jaya, so many levels 🙂
Jaya Avendel
Levels is the perfect word for this! Thanks, Lisa. <3
eob2
I like that you put the wide spacing between
Princess-underdog-bully
It speaks volumes to the beginning and ending of this piece. Nicely done, Jaya.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you! This is the first time I have been creative with spacing and I love how it turned out.
eob2
You’re welcome. 🙂
writtencasey
“I live these lives madly”
Top notch.
Love and Literature
Woah, such a powerful poem. It’s so beautiful, and shaped in a heart too! Thanks so much for sharing this x
Melissa Kacar
This poem is so powerful and beautifully written! I also love the photo you paired with it! Thank you for sharing this, great work as always!
Sharila
As I read your words, I kept looking at the accompanying image. It all put me in the mind of the pretenses and masks we wear.
Jaya Avendel
I always try to provide a dynamic image alongside my poems so I love that you felt his one! Thank you.
Ingrid
There is a lot of judgment trending at the moment: nicely put!
Jaya Avendel
I feel like judgement and opinions are always trending at times! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Ingrid. 🙂
Keep Calm & Drink Coffee
“No choice but to bleed hearts and tears” is a powerful expression linking to strong state of mind that recall pain and compulsion.
Life don’t indulge when let us face to these feelings.
Thanks a lot for sharing this “trending” which evokes a tsunami of feelings.
Jaya Avendel
Oo! Tsunami of feelings. I am truly honored.