Mute
She speaks for those who
Have no voice in a silent
Battle with herself.
Artwork: Shhh by Minja Pantic
May the Words Flow
She speaks for those who
Have no voice in a silent
Battle with herself.
Artwork: Shhh by Minja Pantic
Caedere
I still don’t understand how you can create such an eerie atmosphere with 3 lines, but I absolutely love it.
nortoncharity
This one definitely speaks to me and it is so powerful! Thanks for sharing!
Lisa's Notebook
I’m intrigued to read some of the comments saying they didn’t know if she was good or bad – for me she was definitely a good person who speaks for others even in the knowledge that her own self-preservation might be compromised 🙂
Jaya Avendel
<3 Love that you got a strong and sure vibe from this, Lisa! Thank you for sharing.
Della Driscoll
Beautiful and heartbreaking words, which I resonated with! Fab writing as always xx
lynnmumbingmejia
Oh gosh, I clicked this when I’m getting ready for bed haha lights on for me tonight! In all seriousness, this piece is great as always! I see it both ways too! Could be a positive or negative voice. x
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nianni
This speaks so much volume. Really nice one. The title, the image and the words all correspond.
Kelly Diane
This one is short but so powerful. It has an eerily element to it that makes you want to know more.
Jenny in Neverland
I’m torn between feeling like the person in this poem is good or evil. I think it could be taken both ways! The image you chose to go with it is great – really eerie.
Jaya Avendel
Thank you, Jenny! Love that you get mixed vibes.
Keiran Crying
Wow! The way you can pack such power into so few words, speaks volumes regarding your talent! Beautiful!
Jaya Avendel
Haiku’s are a favorite format of mine because they make me condense what I want to say into its truest form. It has taken practice so I am glad you enjoyed! Thank you. 🙂
Jenny in Neverland
Powerful poem! x
Jaya Avendel
Thank you!
Miss Blogs-A-Bit
So few words there, but they resonated with me!
Jaya Avendel
I love empowering sentences and am so glad they resonated with you!
Girly Gabble
This is powerful!
Love Lozza xo
Jaya Avendel
Thank you!
Unwanted Life
Short but profound
Jaya Avendel
😊Thank you for enjoying.