Folded
From animal
To child
To person
Once you allow your hand to
Strike out in
Anger or calm
The battle is lost.
Photo by Kevin Turcios on Unsplash
May the Words Flow
From animal
To child
To person
Once you allow your hand to
Strike out in
Anger or calm
The battle is lost.
Photo by Kevin Turcios on Unsplash
briannalbbh
Wow! This is a wonderful, well-written poem. The meaning is a powerful one and I like how you were able to get your point across in such a short piece. You have a way with words. Thanks for sharing this!
Riana.AngCanning
Wow, so powerful! I had to read it a few times to get the meaning. But I think that’s what I love about poetry – that there are so many layers and hidden meanings!
gemmaajaynee
A beautiful and wonderful poem thanks for sharing x
Stephanie
Your poetry always brings about such deep emotions for me. This is just beautiful!
Charity
So very true! Such a powerful piece of writing!
Sara James
A lovely and inspirational poem. Healthy relationships need love, compassion, understanding, and acceptance.
Jaya Avendel
Nicely said, Sara, thank you!
lynnmumbingmejia
So powerful!! I loved this piece so much. I 100% agree. Emotions are a crazy thing, right?! So hard to control sometimes but so needed. Beautiful as always! xx
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Jeff Flesch
I love this poem, Jaya, and the picture is perfect. Wonderful!
Keiran Crying
I love this poem! I love all of your poems if I’m honest. I love how you say so little but leave so much to interpret here. The photography presumably handpicked for each piece you write and post, is exquisitely beautiful!
Jaya Avendel
I love reading poetry that leaves room for interpretation so I try to write mine that way to.
Finding the perfect image for each poem is a wonderful task; Unsplash is an amazing curator of beautiful and free photos. 🙂
thislifeasd
It might seem like I’m stalking you, but you write beautifully. Every piece is so powerful, thanks for sharing! 🙌🏼
Jaya Avendel
Thank YOU for enjoying!
Boss Babe Chronicles
Great work, as usual 🙂
Shantanu Baruah
Absolutely truth told in such a beautiful way
bournemouthgirl
So lovely!!
Jenny in Neverland
Such a powerful poem and so true x
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for enjoying! 🙂
deltadeathstorm
Powerful. Really powerful. .
mjaquette
So true!!!