Conscious
Look back over your
Shoulder for a hundred things
Wait to be improved.
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Look back over your
Shoulder for a hundred things
Wait to be improved.
Photo by Neslihan Gunaydin on Unsplash
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Kelly Diane
Such a powerful piece. It really got me thinking about my past & reflecting on things.
nortoncharity
Such a simple yet powerful piece! Amazing as usual my friend!
Margarida Vasconcelos
Wow, it’s amazing how a few words can be so powerful. Love this piece and the important message it gives, thank you!
itshannahcatherine
Another amazing piece! I love how simple it is yet it is so powerful!
bloglifewitherica
I agree with Sara. This piece is about self-reflection for me. We can always look over our shoulder and view the past, and measure how far we have traveled.
Such a nice piece.
xo Erica
lynnmumbingmejia
Love this piece, Jaya! I interpret it as needing to tackle and understand your past (over your shoulder) first in order to truly improve yourself for the future. Thanks for sharing xx
Lynn | https://www.lynnmumbingmejia.com
Sara James
Self-reflection, awareness of the present, and a positive attitude make everyone’s lives better. You have said this beautifully and with great simplicity in this haiku.
Thanks, Jaya xx
Jodie | That Happy Reader
Your poems always connect with me. They are so powerful. Thanks again for sharing!
Kelly Diane
Sometimes the shortest poems can be the most powerful, which is definitely the case with this one.
femaleoriginal
Another great piece! I interpret this as the idea of looking back and reflecting on things that’ve happened to you with a whole new perspective, and then moving forward by working on yourself x
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Jenny in Neverland
Another amazing poem. So much to think about in so little words x
Kayleigh Zara
I love these poems, you make so much happen in so little words which is an amazing talent x
Kayleigh Zara 🌟 http://www.kayleighzaraa.com
Jaya Avendel
🙂
Je 🍃 (@mywellnessme)
Lovely haiku there! 🙂
Jaya Avendel
Thank you for enjoying. 🙂
S.S. Mitchell
Food for thought…look back over your shoulder. This makes me think of the many things we have yet to resolve and confront, yet life always tells us to keep looking forward. How can we when the baggage keeps us chained and reminds us it needs clearing?
Jaya Avendel
A marvelous way of expressing this! While it can hurt to hold yourself back when you should move forward, it is good to know when to pause and clean up.
Jenny in Neverland
Very powerful poem. Sometimes we don’t need a lot of words to get an important message across!
Jaya Avendel
Exactly!
justnatonya
Extremely powerful. Sometimes it only takes a few words to get the message across.
Natonya | https://www.justnatonya.wordpress.com
Jaya Avendel
Yes; I love condensing everything down into as few vibrant words as possible.