Intuition Two rows of writing Blur into one tale but you Read between the lines. Inspired by Eugi’s Weekly Prompt: magic Photo by Alex Simpson on Unsplash Want access to exclusive writing? Become a patron! Spread The StoryClick to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)MoreClick to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window)Click to email this to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related 35 thoughts on “Intuition” Add yours Lovely piece! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Great piece! It’s wonderful how you convey such a powerful message in so few words! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Loved reading this one, Jaya! I see this in a lot of speech or words online. A big part of understanding is reading between the lines which can be good and bad haha. Thanks for sharing xx Lynn | https://www.lynnmumbingmejia.com LikeLiked by 2 people Reply I feel this too, Lynn. It is constant reading between the lines that causes trouble when we should be reading the actual text and vice versa too in some cases. We need balance for sure! 🙂 LikeLike Reply I love this so much, it hit me right in the feels! Beautiful words xx LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Short yet powerful poem, incredible work Jaya! x LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Short but powerful–often you don’t many words to convey meaning and emotion. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Sometimes very few words can blow you off your feet, and this is what your words have just done to me Jaya, so thank you. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply I am delighted this connected with you so profoundly, Simona! LikeLike Reply I always find it amazing how such few words can make such a powerful message. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Ah, yes, Jaya, it’s always the unseen that’s the most fun to see. Lovely. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Pingback: Eugi’s Causerie Weekly Prompt – Magic – Roundup – Eugi's Causerie A picture is worth a thousand words. But a poem from Jaya is worth a thousand pictures. 😉 LikeLiked by 2 people Reply 🙏😍 Yours are among the kindest and most inspiring words I have ever received! Thank you. LikeLike Reply Although it wasn’t your intention, your work reminded me of my issues with dyslexia, with how rows of writing always blur together as I completely miss what I’ve just read and have to reread again. Another great piece, the world exists in the gray so you often have to read between the lines LikeLiked by 2 people Reply 😍 Oo, I am so happy that your perspective on this is so new and yet so welcome. Thank you for sharing the way you read this! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Wow ✨ LikeLiked by 2 people Reply I love this, I feel like so many of us are wired to try and look between the lines of almost everything we see. Intuition is such a powerful tool. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply This is stunning, deep work. I really like how you created it from the prompt. As short as it is, it truly resonates with me, which is not easy to do in such few words. Great work! You have a way with words. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Thank you so much, Brianna! LikeLike Reply I feel a real connection to this lovely piece! The meaning of words aren’t always perceived as they are written. Thanks for sharing! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply This little poem has your signature in it- build a fence with words, hide a few treasures, and leave it for the readers to pick the gems. Three rows of a lovely haiku that brought a smile to my face 🙂 I don’t find short necessarily sweet except for the works of a few writers and you are 100% one of them. Thanks for sharing xx LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Aww, thank you so much, Jess, for your incredible read! LikeLike Reply This is very deep. I love it! There is so much meaning between the lines. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Well done, Jaya! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Very clever! 🙂 LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Delighted you think so, Tom! LikeLike Reply Yes! How true this can be! Brevity and brilliant writing. I love it! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply 😊 Your prompts bring out the best in me. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply That’s quite a compliment! Thank you! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Yes, some can read between the lines! It’s an art. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply And this is LOVE at the first sight! i simply adore reading between the lines ❤ I share. THANK YOU SO MUCH LikeLiked by 2 people Reply So skillfully done! LikeLiked by 3 people Reply Beautifully said. I resonate with this a lot; we depict so much in our writing, we hide the meanings that most don’t see. What a beautiful thing when someone discovers and hits those nuances that we thought we hid so well! I only have one friend that hits the nail every time and it still shocks me lol (not in surprise but just knowing someone else gets it, really gets it, it’s powerful). You state this beautifully, eloquently in brevity. 👏👏 LikeLiked by 3 people Reply Thank you, Lucy, for sharing your between the lines experience! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Share your feelings with me Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. 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