I wasted my wish on chocolate
Wrapped in absurd sunsets
Tasted bitter love on my tongue
My kiss comes in black cocoa
I prefer the shiver of sweetness tenderness leaves behind.
You cast your wish
Under starlit canopy, let it
Carry you to the aqua depths of the ocean
Where starfish touch your pearling ankles and
Bears walk among the coral.
Inspired by Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt 203: Absurd in 61 words.
Also inspired by Eugi’s Weekly Prompt: Canopy
Photo by Dayne Topkin on Unsplash
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I love the first verse especially the line “tasted bitter love on my tongue.”
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Lovely poem, loved the ‘bears among the coral’. It reminds me of the constant fight for life in the sea
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This is incredible, such vivid imagery!
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The imagery is incredible. Loved how expressive you made this. Great piece.
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Absolutely in love with the imagery you have put in here! ✨
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Thank you! Imagery is 💐
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I can literally close my eyes and paint such a vivid picture. Thank you so for another great piece.
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Delighted you enjoyed the poem so deeply! The Directory is a handy place to be listed for sure. ❤
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The imagery in this is incredibly stunning! Such a beautiful piece Jaya. Love it x
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Incredible poem – so vivid! x
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The imagery in this is stunning!
Corinne x
http://www.skinnedcartree.com
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A beautiful piece as always! The images you are able to conjure up in my head with your words is such a delight. Wonderful, thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for your lovely reading!
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This is beautiful. I love how you write so beautifully
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This poem is so bittersweet and true, sometimes your wish is not what you truly desire but one has to live with the decision.
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I enjoy your reading of this! Thank you.
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Beautiful images!
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This is such a great piece Jaya. So descriptive and creates a great picture
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Beautifully written Jaya. Its so emotive and vivid, it really got my imagination working overtime.
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Wonderful imagery, and I love the phrases “absurd sunsets” and “starlit canopy” – very beautiful! Thanks for sharing.
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Another great piece Jaya! I love the imagery it conjures up and takes on different meanings. I don’t know why, but I can imagine this being about a summer romance/holiday fling.
thanks for sharing 🙂
Aimsy xoxo
Aimsy’s Antics
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Thank you! I love this piece as a summer romance or holiday fling. 🙂
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Wonderfully vivid, and I feel it fits the theme of absurdity perfectly! There’s so much to unpack in the narrator’s relationship and the journey they are transported through, this is brilliant
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Thank you, Tom, for sharing your enthusiastic thoughts!
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Another fantastic piece of writing, I love your inspiration and it just made me think of positive times ahead 😁
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Love, chocolate, and sunsets, just in the first stanza. 🥰
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Unwrapping is a sacred process. 😆
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Yes, on so many levels. Love that. ❤
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Love the first stanza, especially the first two lines. Great way to open a poem!
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Thank you kindly!
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“Wrapped in absurd sunsets”
Delightful.
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Beautiful! Your writing is always incredible, thank you x
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Wow, beautiful piece! I’m envious, I’d love to be able to write poetry like this.
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Enchanting piece, Jaya! Drawing apart can be bitter sweet. Thank you for joining in my prompt!
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It is a delight, Eugenia, to partake in your beautifully inspiring prompts!
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My pleasure, Jaya!
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I love your imagery here Jaya!
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Oh about me I suppose I have wasted too many wishes in chocolate.
On the acqua depth of the ocean you made me come in mind an image of something like a water baggy dress, can’t explain why.
Bears walking among the coral would do less damages than we “humans” do.
Embrace ❤
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I too have wasted wishes in chocolate. I enjoy your imagery of a water baggy dress and your thoughts on bears among the coral! Thank you. 😁
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