Thrust I am into unwelcome hugs
No choice but to bleed hearts and tears
Princess underdog bully
I live these lives madly
In their heads I laugh
No room for me
Judgement day
Lack of
Trust.
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Beautiful ❤️
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This is such a powerful piece.
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This is a really interesting piece, great use of language Jaya!
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this was just beautiful!
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Such a powerful and thought provoking poem, Jaya! The first time I read it, I interpreted it very differently to how I interpreted it the second time. It always amazes me how the meaning behind your words can change with a small shift in perspective. 🙂
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Beautiful, it’s pisces season so this really resonated.
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What a great piece. It can take on so many different meanings and take a life of its own from them!
Aimsy xoxo
Aimsy’s Antics
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This is just a poignant poem. It really spoke to me and got me thinking about currently events being spoken about in the media.
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You have portrayed feelings a lot of us have at times with few words – it’s very emotive!
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I love this poem! Fantastic piece of writing and beautifully done!
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The words “No choice but to bleed hearts and tears” really attract me! Such a powerful poem and beautifully written. Always great work, Jaya x
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Beautiful words again, Jaya! I don’t know if it’s intentional but I love the shape the words take too, definitely affected the pace and intensity when I was reading. Great post!
Anika | chaptersofmay.com
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Thank you so much for appreciating the shape of this piece! I love that you connected with the way it held the words together. 🙂
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That seems to pretty much sum up my entire childhood. Another great piece
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Interesting ideas, if you’re considering generally introverted people. Not everyone feeds off the energy of others, and for some, the experience of interaction can be exhausting and feel like you are bleeding away a part of yourself
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Oooh this was powerful! Kinda feels like it should be in a YA book or movie!
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Amazingly written, love it!
Amber | https://theunpredictedpage.com
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Obviously I don’t know what or who you had in mind when you wrote this but it made me think of celebrities who have to put on a public face for the crowds and fans, no matter how they really feel inside. Love this, Jaya, so many levels 🙂
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Levels is the perfect word for this! Thanks, Lisa. ❤
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I like that you put the wide spacing between
Princess-underdog-bully
It speaks volumes to the beginning and ending of this piece. Nicely done, Jaya.
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Thank you! This is the first time I have been creative with spacing and I love how it turned out.
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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“I live these lives madly”
Top notch.
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Woah, such a powerful poem. It’s so beautiful, and shaped in a heart too! Thanks so much for sharing this x
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This poem is so powerful and beautifully written! I also love the photo you paired with it! Thank you for sharing this, great work as always!
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As I read your words, I kept looking at the accompanying image. It all put me in the mind of the pretenses and masks we wear.
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I always try to provide a dynamic image alongside my poems so I love that you felt his one! Thank you.
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There is a lot of judgment trending at the moment: nicely put!
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I feel like judgement and opinions are always trending at times! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Ingrid. 🙂
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“No choice but to bleed hearts and tears” is a powerful expression linking to strong state of mind that recall pain and compulsion.
Life don’t indulge when let us face to these feelings.
Thanks a lot for sharing this “trending” which evokes a tsunami of feelings.
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Oo! Tsunami of feelings. I am truly honored.
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