Hanging beyond reach
On an old peach tree sweetest
Fruit smiles and taunts me.
Photo by Roberta Sorge on Unsplash
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Temptation
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Such a pretty poem! Short but impactful.
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A beautiful poem as always. Your poems always give me such imagery.
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This poem definitely makes me think of temptation. You are such a talented writer! I always love reading your work!
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This got me thinking about Adam and Eve!
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I can be so hard to not give into temptation and I think you captured that perfectly with this piece! x
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Life throws temptations our way sometimes. I love the imagery of the peach tree x
Sophie
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Thank you. 🙂
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Such a lovely piece!
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Soemtimes, there are things in life that gives us temptations to reach for it even though there are some risks associated with it. As they said, high risk comes with high rewards often times… But not all the time. Love your analogy as you compared reaching for a fruit that’s not in your normal boundaries based on temptations!!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
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Ah yes, there are often risks surrounding temptations and we may not always see them in time. Sometimes, perhaps, it is best if we cannot reach the fruit until our eyes are fully open. 🙂
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!
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Very nice! 🙂 The photo is of apples.
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I am glad you enjoyed! For some reason, peaches just did not want to let me find them that day!
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sublime
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Why, thank you. I am honored you loved it so much!
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it is wonderful. thank you for sharing it with us all.
Peace ✌☮
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You are most welcome. I thank you for appreciating it.
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This is a really nice piece! I must read some more.
Holly
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I love the way you paint a picture with your words. I can almost smell the peaches and feel the warm breeze. I picture lace curtains fluttering from the kitchen, where the peach tree is also in view. And maybe the scent of a warm peach pie in the oven?
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Peach pie is divine! 🙂
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