Her friend pushed her
Past the breaking point.
Stoic lines teased her mind
The prison for assault.
She left him with a
Turn of her heel
Grinding holes into the dust.
Her child pushed her
Past the breaking point.
Broken lines teased her mind
Freedom in size
With a red behind
She left him.
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This poem is everything!! There is a point where too much is too much and we need to walk away, especially when it goes on over time. There is a lot of powerful emotions behind this, especially when it deals with human to human interactions.
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
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Human to human interactions was what I was aiming to show in this poem, and I am so glad you connected with that! Thank you.
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Great poem! You can reallly feel the emotion in it.
Thanks for sharing!
Aimsy xoxo
Aimsy’s Antics
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Thanks so much for reading!
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Beautiful! Such ana emotive piece x
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This is written so well. I can feel the emotion x
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Thank you!
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I love this one and really felt it, especially the friends pushed her past her breaking point! Love the longer one!!
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Thank you! It was hard to get the two parts of the poem to reflect each other so I am glad it came across well to you. 🙂
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Great poem, well written x
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This is such an interesting one! It’s so nice to see a longer poem from you as I’m so used to regular style x
Kayleigh Zara 🌟 http://www.kayleighzaraa.com
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Thanks! I like to try something new once in a while.
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