A crimson haze in
The desert sky hides the blue
Fish used to swim here.
Photo by Brad Helmink on Unsplash
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Dead Sea
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Lovely! It makes me think of space and the planets that used to hold water, the mysteries behind it all.
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Thank you! I love the way you read this.
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This is like the perfect definition of a wasteland. What used to be (along with the fish) is no more. Thanks for this xxx
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It takes real talent to say so much, in so few words. Sadly, I’m not convinced that those in a position to make a substantial change will ever take the time to read it. Still, slightly more optimistically, if it makes just one person stop and think, and make a change then it has been a huge success.
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I agree with the comment above. It really does make you think. The planet is certainly changing.
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This is powerful and kind of sad, if you interpret it in that way x
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Short but powerful. Your words are always so thought-provoking, thank you for sharing your talent ❤ xx
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
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This is really chilling and amazingly written!
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Thank you kindly. 🙂
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I love how you say so much by saying so little.
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I like this one a lot! Thought provoking | lanalikes.com
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Lovely and thought-provoking poem. Thanks for the perspective ☺️
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Such a beautiful (and fascinating) part of the world ♥
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I wish I had the kind of writing skills to write stuff like this
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What we write is vastly different, therefor so is our talent. 🙂
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Your use of words is so different, I like it. Such a talent 💜
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Very interesting. It sparked my interest in the Dead Sea.
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This is a chilling one! x
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Brr. ❄️
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Makes you think x
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I am so glad!
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