Their tendrils are gone
Replaced by stiff ribs hiding
Oceans within them.
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Another fab poem, love this one!
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Replaced by stiff ribs hiding. This sounds so beautiful.
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Another great poem. This really made me think about the damage around me.
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Lovely poem! It’s so creative how you described the cacti!
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Love your poetry with the image!
xx Dasynka
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Yet again another beautiful and well written poem! I am always blown away by them!
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Wow, so powerful! This makes me very sad. The combination of the cactus picture and the poem really bring the point home. Thank you for sharing this!
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I love ‘hiding oceans within them’ as a way of describing cacti! Great piece x
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As usual another beautiful piece. How do you come up with these wonders? I would love to know your writing process.
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Wow, you are so creative with words!xx
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Beautiful and poignant in so little words!
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I still can’t get over how much you can tell us with so few words. I absolutely adore this poem!
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You’re so creative with your words 🙂
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I like this analogy. Even though the cactus is out in the dry desert, they have a ton of water within to help them survive.
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
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I have been learning about them. The crested saguaro is really lovely! Sadly, my trip to Tucson is almost at an end!
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Lovely little post!
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Ah, this is so beautiful ❤️🌸💕
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Thank you! It means so much coming from you. 🙂
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My pleasure
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Terrific, love the relationship between water storing cacti and oceans within!
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Almost impossible not to be inspired in the heart of the Sonoran desert! 🙂
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