They chased the woman away from the hilltop. A marking of stones made the hilltop different from the other slopes in Moontown.
She came from the woods, her hair deserving of jewels and her face as sad as a dying tulip.
She came once a year, despite the rocks and sticks brandished at her, risking it all to touch the stone marking before she fled.
On the single day the woman did not come, a demon rose. The sun witnessed the town crumble.
In a nearby field a sheep grazed. A wolf watched it; a guardian in another form.
Photo by Patrick Hendry on Unsplash.
Howdy, I think your blog could be having web browser compatibility problems. When I look at your website in Safari, it looks fine but when opening in Internet Explorer, it’s got some overlapping issues. I simply wanted to provide you with a quick heads up! Other than that, excellent blog!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wonderful words, I was hoping for more! Such a great story x
Sophie
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂 I thought this little fellow might have been too short but it seemed to say enough. Thank you for enjoying!
LikeLike
Powerful words drawing me in, making me keen to read more. I really liked this post 👍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very gripping short story! Sounds like it could be the snippet of a full length dramatic tale to!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I dabble in longer tales but this is definitely a shorter one of mine! Thank you for enjoying.
LikeLike
Wow. A brilliant story
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
Wow, these words:
“She came from the woods, her hair deserving of jewels and her face as sad as a dying tulip.”
So beautiful
LikeLiked by 1 person
I wrote this when tulips were still blooming. I am so happy the way I saw the dying tulip was conveyed through those words! 😊
LikeLike
A story wrapped in mystery and intrigue– sounds to me the town needed the woman but they didn’t realize it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A mistake so many make. Prejudice gets in the way of many a good relationship! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is absolutely beautiful writing! Very emotional, I was hooked. The dying tulip line is especially beautiful, I really like that for some reason.
Jordanne || thelifeofaglasgowgirl.co.uk
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! I was worried it may be a bit short so I am thrilled emotion and mystique resonated with you! 🌺🌷
LikeLike
Its perfect.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You always got this amazing ability to create a fantastic reality with a few sentences.
I love this story, especially the way you ended it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww, thank you! I kind of felt this little piece was a little lacking . . .
LikeLiked by 1 person