B is for Bramble
In this mess lies a poem soon
To come together.
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B is for Bramble
In this mess lies a poem soon
To come together.
Photo by Istock
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So honest! Yes, when writing poetry (something I used to do) it is a bit of a mess for a while and then suddenly, you have a poem! Beautiful!
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Well said! Time is a beautifier of everything.
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I really like this poem! It seems simple yet complex at the same time!
Tash // A Girl with a View
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Such huge talent you reflect in your writing 🙂
Lindifique
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Your brevity and depth are what I adore, beautiful!
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😍🙏
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That is definitely what it feels like when you’re trying to get your thoughts together. Another great one!
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This one reminded me of the moments before you start writing a poem or a story or anything when all your thoughts are a right jumble in your brain, before they come together on paper 🙂
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I wrote this poem in that moment right as things start to fall into place so I am glad you connected with that feeling! Thank you.
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful writing an picture 🙂
Elvira | https://elviraedison.com/
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Thank you so much for enjoying this piece!
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So simple, yet so powerful. Love this poem!
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Awesome poem, and I love the image. I really wish I had this kind of writing talent
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This is a great one Jaya, brambles all interlinked! The image is a great reflection of your piece. Thank you for sharing Jaya.
Lauren | http://www.bournemouthgirl.com
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I love this piece! Bramble made by different parts intertwining with each other. Thanks for sharing!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
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My thoughts exactly! 🌹
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My garden was overtaken by bramble when we moved, it still comes back fighting every spring. The mention of the B word gives me flashbacks of me hacking away at the stuff, and getting covered in scratches. Gives me the shivers. The nuance of this piece is probably lost on me 😂
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Hacking away at brambles is no fun! On the up side, getting it done feels so good. 🙂
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Lovely as always 🙂 Your writing is so magical.
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Thank you! 🙂 I love knowing you enjoyed.
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Beautiful! I love your writing.
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🙂
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I find this so interesting, it’s almost a poem in terms of content but also something completely different! Thanks for sharing x
Kayleigh Zara 🌿 http://www.kayleighzaraa.com
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🙂 This is one of my favorite haiku’s. I feel it gives reassurance when nothing one writes is working.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
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Somehow, I find the words inspiring too. It reminded me that despite the mess we are going through… Everything will all come together beautifully in the end. ❤️
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It is easy to get lost when nothing comes together. I find beautiful things always emerge from a thorn thicket! 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Lovely
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Absolutely beautiful and deep
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