Inside a bottle unopened
Pressure builds
A stopper removed and
Liquid flows.
Inside a heart lidded
Frustration builds
The top removed and
Tears flow
Carrying in their essence
The chains that once
Bound you.
Tears are diamonds to the
Soul.
Photo by Sharon McCutcheon on Unsplash.
Beautiful metaphor. Great writing.
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Thank you!
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Wow, this is so beautiful! Great poem! 🍀 – Mentje
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Aww, thank you! I love it when people connect with the words I put a piece of myself into. 🙂
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Pure Sublime – loved it
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😃 Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Wonderful poem, Jaya! The analogy between the bottle and the heart is very effective. Also a powerful depiction of the wonderful catharsis that stems from freeing the body of emotions. Well done!
Roger
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I loved thinking up that analogy! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. 🙂
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I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing x
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This is beautiful! x
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❤️ that you enjoyed.😊
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I love this poem❤️
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Thank you so much for enjoying!
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You’re welcome!
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Wow, what a powerful poem x
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Love this 👏
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Gorgeous imagery, I especially love the tears and diamonds connection.
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That is one of my favorite comparisons!
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So gorgeous. Lush.
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This is so beautiful. It makes me feel an emotion I can’t quite explain.
I think the picture goes perfectly! A good compliment.
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I have felt that emotion before! 🥰
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Beautiful
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Wow this is so lovely!! And the picture goes perfectly with it
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😊 I seem to be making good picture choices lately!
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