Published by Jaya Avendel
Jaya Avendel is a word witch from the Blue Ridge Mountains of Virginia, writing family into fantasy through poetry and prose. Her writing has been published at Visual Verse, Free Verse Revolution, and Spillwords Press, among others, and is published in "As The World Burns" Anthology from Indie Blu(e) Publishing.
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Aww this made me so sad. I’m happy it had a good ending
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Reality is often sad, though this telling is fictional! I am glad I could give it some sunshine at the end!
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This was enlightening and touching x
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So glad you enjoyed!
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This is very touching. I want to hug Milo – people like him literally are life savers.
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I love people like Milo; foster parents are not just there to give kids a place to sleep and food. They truly have to love them.
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You are so right! And if they do they literally can alter a child’s whole life. I work within the area of Foster and adoption so it’s something I’m really passionate about.
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Oh, wow, how amazing that you work within the fostering area. I do not work within it but I am passionate about it and might move into it one day.
I now feel even more happy that you connected with this piece!
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I can feel your love of children and your passion that they are treated with love and care in much of your writing. A child’s relationship with their caregiver forms their template for how they view themselves, others and how they are able to recognize and manage their emotions. For children who have experienced trauma, a loving and accepting carer can shape these templates in ways that shapes that child’s future. But, it is not an easy job to be a good carer….. And, there are many who do it for the wrong reasons.
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That is truly one of my passions! I am a big lover of families that have no violence, and also a visualizer and embodier of hoping that children who are hurt find the love they need.
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What the current U.S. so-called administration is doing is surely unconscionable child-abuse.
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. . . . It is sad there is not more empathy in the world to stop such heartless things from happening.
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This was an interesting way of doing this. I don’t know if this is a real account, but it hit me really hard. I’m not a foster kid but I can only imagine the heartache and pain a lot of them go through. Thank you for sharing.
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I wanted to try something new and was really happy with the way this turned out! It is fictional but I feel like it represents what a lot of foster kids go through.
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What a beautiful story. God only knows what foster children go through. I hope more of them get what that this little one got.
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If more children find the happiness Jay did, we will be looking at a rainbow. 🙂
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You almost choked me – at the beginning it sounded like the book ROOM, then I saw how all his pretence was wrong, for good, foster kids always has scars, and your story gave so much hope – much love to you
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Yesterday I happened to see your comment and I borrowed and finished ROOM. It was a fascinating book, with a wonderful perspective.
Foster kids have scars but I am so glad I could give hope. Thank you for enjoying!
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Wow. You read it in one go. You are fabulous. I am glad you liked it. I am amazed at your thought process. In fact at awe
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It was an engrossing book!
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😊🌸❤️
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