A feeble ray of
Sunshine struggles against the
Snow Queen’s cold outmatched
In a clash of the seasons
Winter declares dominance.
Photo by Budimir Vasilijevic
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Match Of The Seasons
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This is great, Jaya! I can so feel this especially when it’s been so cold and gloomy for a while then the sun comes out for a bit. I get so happy but in the dead of winter, it only lasts the day then we are back to the cold and gloomy. Thanks for sharing xx
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love this!
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I absolutely love your works that are about the cold or winter. They send a shiver down my spine.
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Another beautiful poem! You’ve articulated well the battle of the seasons! Thanks for sharing!
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This is so beautifully written! I love it.
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So well written, beautiful words as always x
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I love how this can be viewed as both the beginnings of Winter and the start of Spring! I’m definitely ready for some rays of sunshine that’s for sure! x
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Oh wow! What a beautiful poem. It definitely describes whats going on with the weather right now perfectly.
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It really does! 🙂
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So nicely done!
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Ooo I love this one! I feel like it perfectly describes the walk I was on yesterday where the sun was poking through the trees and then the cool air seemed to take over.
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Thank you for sharing; the wind seems so real to me through your words!
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I love this one!! Especially with the mention about the snow queen. I love that winter is coming – I can feel the coldness in the morning. Winter definitely is declaring dominance during this time! Thanks for sharing!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
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Brr. Those bitter mornings inspired this, as you guessed. 🙂
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This is a gorgeous poem with a stunning title!
Soph – https://girlvsworldblog.com x
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Thank you kindly!
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Love this! Feeble ray of sunshine is such a beautiful phrase 🙂
Laura / https://www.laustworld.com/
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I have felt it one too many times!
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As a big fan of Winter, I love this one! x
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Nicely done.
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Well penned Jaya.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
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