She speaks for those who
Have no voice in a silent
Battle with herself.
Artwork: Shhh by Minja Pantic
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I still don’t understand how you can create such an eerie atmosphere with 3 lines, but I absolutely love it.
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This one definitely speaks to me and it is so powerful! Thanks for sharing!
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I’m intrigued to read some of the comments saying they didn’t know if she was good or bad – for me she was definitely a good person who speaks for others even in the knowledge that her own self-preservation might be compromised 🙂
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❤ Love that you got a strong and sure vibe from this, Lisa! Thank you for sharing.
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Beautiful and heartbreaking words, which I resonated with! Fab writing as always xx
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Oh gosh, I clicked this when I’m getting ready for bed haha lights on for me tonight! In all seriousness, this piece is great as always! I see it both ways too! Could be a positive or negative voice. x
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This speaks so much volume. Really nice one. The title, the image and the words all correspond.
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This one is short but so powerful. It has an eerily element to it that makes you want to know more.
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I’m torn between feeling like the person in this poem is good or evil. I think it could be taken both ways! The image you chose to go with it is great – really eerie.
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Thank you, Jenny! Love that you get mixed vibes.
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Wow! The way you can pack such power into so few words, speaks volumes regarding your talent! Beautiful!
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Haiku’s are a favorite format of mine because they make me condense what I want to say into its truest form. It has taken practice so I am glad you enjoyed! Thank you. 🙂
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Powerful poem! x
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Thank you!
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So few words there, but they resonated with me!
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I love empowering sentences and am so glad they resonated with you!
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This is powerful!
Love Lozza xo
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Thank you!
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Short but profound
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😊Thank you for enjoying.
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