A ray of light falls across the torn land, the first sliver of hope in days of grim war. Smoke clears away as if sifted clean of ash by a magic sieve. A bird swoops across the sky, careful to avoid the scavengers gnawing at the discarded bodies of enemy men still on the field.
A tiny town sits on the edge of the wheat field now serving as a scavenger ground. The sounds of celebration rise like music to the sky.
Note: This literary piece is exactly 82 words, not including Notes and the below attributions.
Written for Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt #84
And Free Thought Thursday: A Ray of Light
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Wow this was so atmospheric. I could picture this scene so clearly.
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Wow you did so amazing sharing all this in 100 words or less. You are so talented!
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Fantastic as always. This painted such a clear picture in my head.
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This is so beautiful! It was like a whole novel in less than 100 words. Lovely as always.
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Amazing! I really imagined a scene in my head! x
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Always love to read your writing! Well done xxx
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Beautiful imagery and flow. I love the cadence of this piece. Thank you for sharing.
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What a beautiful image and words. it transported me to a tranquil place! Thank you so much for sharing it.
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Tranquil is a beautiful word.
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Wow great post! Love your descriptions..very well written! 🙂
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Thank you kindly. ❤
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I love the way you paint complete pictures with so few words. And I really like the complete image too!
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I am so glad the picture came across; sometimes I fear I use too few words. 🙂
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I love your way with descriptions of nature. You could make this one a series where we learn a little more about this town each time. I’m curious to know more!
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Ooh, that is a fun idea! Maybe I will do a series and describe different towns.
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.
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Different to your other work I’ve read so far, but still a great read
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🙂
I love seeing how my writing changes over time! Thank you.
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Now that was an original take on the prompt. Well done!
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Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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Lovely imagery and juxtaposition!
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It was hard making it all come together in less then a hundred words. Glad you enjoyed!
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