The forest blazes

Long shadows through the fire

It gives off no heat.

Photo by Andras Vas on Unsplash

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  1. Love it, and the picture goes perfectly! I was just talking to someone the other day about how strange it is that the body sometimes confuses hot and cold. Even though they are quite the opposite they definitely have some similarities when it comes to our perception of them.

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  2. Such an interesting piece, the way I interpreted it was that the forest is in a way a sanctuary that provided warmth to a community so when the fire arises from either natural causes, global warming etc., the warmth and homliness feeling of the community that derived from the forest is no longer there (really not sure if that makes sense but I really loved this piece, makes me wish my poetry writing days, such great imagery!)

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