The forest blazes
Long shadows through the fire
It gives off no heat.
Photo by Andras Vas on Unsplash
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It’s always interesting to see what you write next – you have such a creative way of looking at different topics & processes.
MB | http://www.meaghan-bethany.blogspot.com
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Such an interesting piece, the way I interpreted it was that the forest is in a way a sanctuary that provided warmth to a community so when the fire arises from either natural causes, global warming etc., the warmth and homliness feeling of the community that derived from the forest is no longer there (really not sure if that makes sense but I really loved this piece, makes me wish my poetry writing days, such great imagery!)
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What a creative way to interpret this piece! Thank you for giving me a new perspective.
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Oh this is so lovely I wish I could write poetry 😍
Han | http://www.behindthefalselashes.com
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It takes a little practice. 😉
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I agree with the comment above, it’s amazing how easily this painted a picture in my mind x
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I really love where you took this poem, and I really love the last line? Thanks for sharing x
Kayleigh Zara ❄️✨ http://www.kayleighzaraa.com
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Thank you for telling me what you so enjoyed!
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Beautiful. It’s amazing how you can paint a picture in someone’s mind with so few words. I can close my eyes and picture it
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Your kind words are making me picture you now. 🙂
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