Freeze The forest blazes Long shadows through the fire It gives off no heat. Photo by Andras Vas on Unsplash Join me on Patreon for more creave writing! Spread The StoryClick to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)MoreClick to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window)Click to email this to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related 23 thoughts on “Freeze” Add yours Love it, and the picture goes perfectly! I was just talking to someone the other day about how strange it is that the body sometimes confuses hot and cold. Even though they are quite the opposite they definitely have some similarities when it comes to our perception of them. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Yes! I love how you read this in such a physical sense. 🙂 LikeLike Reply Short and sweet, but you say so much here. This gives me a feeling of being lonely in a room full of people. Great imagery. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I love the contrast in this piece! It really painted a picture in my mind 🙂 x https://www.femaleoriginal.com LikeLiked by 1 person Reply This is such a moving poem – I feel the emotion behinds the words. Thanks for sharing! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I’ve already commented on this one but wanted to comment again because this is so fitting with how cold it’s been right now and I loveee it! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I think the recent USA fires impacted your writings a lot. After the fire, just ashes left of the plants. A great way to turn pain into poetry:) LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Great piece! Thanks for sharing, your poems always make me think! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I really enjoy reading your poems, gets my brain thinking lol, Great post 😊👍🏽! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I love this! Says so much with so little. This one actually made me think for a bit. I was thinking of forest fires but then remembered the title was freeze and the last line tied it together. Thanks for sharing x http://www.lynnmumbingmejia.com LikeLiked by 1 person Reply 😍 Thank you so much for sharing your word by word experience! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Such lovely words! xx Violethollow.com LikeLiked by 1 person Reply It’s always interesting to see what you write next – you have such a creative way of looking at different topics & processes. MB | http://www.meaghan-bethany.blogspot.com LikeLiked by 1 person Reply 😊 LikeLike Reply Such an interesting piece, the way I interpreted it was that the forest is in a way a sanctuary that provided warmth to a community so when the fire arises from either natural causes, global warming etc., the warmth and homliness feeling of the community that derived from the forest is no longer there (really not sure if that makes sense but I really loved this piece, makes me wish my poetry writing days, such great imagery!) LikeLiked by 1 person Reply What a creative way to interpret this piece! Thank you for giving me a new perspective. LikeLike Reply Oh this is so lovely I wish I could write poetry 😍 Han | http://www.behindthefalselashes.com LikeLiked by 1 person Reply It takes a little practice. 😉 LikeLike Reply I agree with the comment above, it’s amazing how easily this painted a picture in my mind x LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I really love where you took this poem, and I really love the last line? Thanks for sharing x Kayleigh Zara ❄️✨ http://www.kayleighzaraa.com LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you for telling me what you so enjoyed! LikeLike Reply Beautiful. It’s amazing how you can paint a picture in someone’s mind with so few words. I can close my eyes and picture it LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Your kind words are making me picture you now. 🙂 LikeLike Reply Share your feelings with me Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.